2007年3月25日 星期日

changing roles

The summary of 〝Changing role〞
It says that you don't have think the role should do this thing, and can't not change anymore. In this story, Neil Walkingshaw wants to protect his newborn child. At first, he thought that his boss could let him to do what he wanted to do. But actually not. Both he and his wife have their own work. They are double pay family. So he decides to sue about the sex discrimination.

In second paragraph, the gender roles change now. Women also can do outside, not just stay at home. And father also can communicate with family members, too. And the husbands also have to come into the delivery room when his wife gave birth. Because they have to know that it’s not just the women's job to do so.

The father and the mother have the different ways to teach child. With the outside body, the child will like father's advice. Because mother will takes too much to let child to refuse.

The father will plays an important role in the family. Something that mother can't take any ideas to solve the problem. But father can do. It can let the juvenile crime rates get lower. It's the problem that the single family can't not solve.

It says that father plays an important role in children's life. In many sides, their will has lots of influence.

The job of father and mother also the same. Maybe someday they will say that father pays more for the family than mother in the future. And the father should take their job as seriously as Neil Walkingshaw.

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鳳娟 提到...

Hi, Sabina
I am Ivy. I have read your summary of "Changing Roles: Stay-at-Home Dads." I think your article is too long, because the summary should be short and express your story-topic clearly. Anyway, you still do a good job.

But I found some mistakes from your article. Maybe I could give some advices to you. At the sentence four, it should be corrected "his boss could let him do what he wanted to do." At the sentence fifteen, I think "the child will follow father's advices” is much better. And at the sentence sixteen, "will takes" should be modified "will take."

In conclusion, I think your writing is great. And I hope you will make progress in your writing.

By Ivy